Love song - I WISH
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Do you like the song?
Love song - I WISH
Each and every night i think of you
and playing my guitar. With my golden
heart - shaped pic . . . . .
I wish I could sing the songs that
can make us cry---Playing with all my heart
and the notes with the words
to you . . . . .
I wish you know what I go through ,
and know your responcible for this lost of sleep
I wish i can go by your window side
playing these notes to you.
And i know what you might be thinking
but I always will be there for you . .
Cause everyone wants to feel this feeling
as I am singing the words to you . .
It was at first sight . .
~ MOCK PENG AKA
My inspiration was Glitterkat.
The people who I tested it on - Ryu10 Rocky
My bff Johny test AKA Jtangle27
For Glitterkat ~~~~~~~~~~~~
and playing my guitar. With my golden
heart - shaped pic . . . . .
I wish I could sing the songs that
can make us cry---Playing with all my heart
and the notes with the words
to you . . . . .
I wish you know what I go through ,
and know your responcible for this lost of sleep
I wish i can go by your window side
playing these notes to you.
And i know what you might be thinking
but I always will be there for you . .
Cause everyone wants to feel this feeling
as I am singing the words to you . .
It was at first sight . .
~ MOCK PENG AKA
My inspiration was Glitterkat.
The people who I tested it on - Ryu10 Rocky
My bff Johny test AKA Jtangle27
For Glitterkat ~~~~~~~~~~~~
Mock Peng- Posts : 1903
Join date : 2008-08-17
Location : hell MUHAHAHAHA
Re: Love song - I WISH
it was pretty good but you repeated alot and rhymed you with you. you could hav had a bigger variety of words but it was still good
Puffy 110- Posts : 1080
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Re: Love song - I WISH
This wasn't a "ryhming song" and if i did i think it was bye mistake
Mock Peng- Posts : 1903
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Re: Love song - I WISH
Mock Peng wrote:This wasn't a "ryhming song" and if i did i think it was bye mistake
did u get the 9000 thing from jtangel27
Re: Love song - I WISH
oooo srryMock Peng wrote:This wasn't a "ryhming song" and if i did i think it was bye mistake
but i like to rhyme
all the time
Puffy 110- Posts : 1080
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Re: Love song - I WISH
i picked i like pie. i always pick that!
if pie wasn't an option then i would've picked... wait...
if over 900 AND like pie wasn't an option i would've picked loved it!
i think it is pretty kewl, and definitely sweet!!!
if pie wasn't an option then i would've picked... wait...
if over 900 AND like pie wasn't an option i would've picked loved it!
i think it is pretty kewl, and definitely sweet!!!
GlitterKat:)- Posts : 2622
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Re: Love song - I WISH
I have made another song , AND IT IS NOT -what puffy110 said - A RYHMING SONG!
Mock Peng- Posts : 1903
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Re: Love song - I WISH
Mock Peng wrote:I have made another song , AND IT IS NOT -what puffy110 said - A RYHMING SONG!
i know the song
Re: Love song - I WISH
aww but rhymes are funMock Peng wrote:I have made another song , AND IT IS NOT -what puffy110 said - A RYHMING SONG!
does you song hav runs?
Puffy 110- Posts : 1080
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Re: Love song - I WISH
WHAT DO YOU MEAN IF MY SONG HAS RUNS???????????????
I only run if its for fun
DARN I JUST RHYMED!
I only run if its for fun
DARN I JUST RHYMED!
Mock Peng- Posts : 1903
Join date : 2008-08-17
Location : hell MUHAHAHAHA
Re: Love song - I WISH
runs are when you hold the note and go in different tunesMock Peng wrote:WHAT DO YOU MEAN IF MY SONG HAS RUNS???????????????
I only run if its for fun
DARN I JUST RHYMED!
just go watch a david archuleta vid to kno what im talkin bout
Puffy 110- Posts : 1080
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Location : New Jersey
Re: Love song - I WISH
ohhh cool video
- Spoiler:
- (did not watch it)
Mock Peng- Posts : 1903
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Re: Love song - I WISH
Puffy 110 wrote:it was pretty good but you repeated alot and rhymed you with you. you could hav had a bigger variety of words but it was still good
It has more variety than rocky!
GlitterKat:)- Posts : 2622
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Re: Love song - I WISH
wow that's acctually a really good love song
rachluvx3- Posts : 239
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Re: Love song - I WISH
i very much like it!
GlitterKat:)- Posts : 2622
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Re: Love song - I WISH
thx , brorachluvx3 wrote:wow that's acctually a really good love song
Mock Peng- Posts : 1903
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Re: Love song - I WISH
rach isnt a bro, shes a sis.
GlitterKat:)- Posts : 2622
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